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I think Jiraya would have a tough time trying to decide which of these girls is better, so let them settle the issue with a eye catching fight ^_^
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MCMXC2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome!
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teturo Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Thank you ^_^
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Ayukawataur Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
first, i would suggest the light hair (defensive) character not have rock so far back. in doing so she has limited her options. and, one is that her punch will also have very little power. when balance is that bad, the hips can not provide appropriate power. this is also evident in the positioning of her front foot, which is hyperextended like the rest of her leg. it would have been better to rock back and roll on the heel, bringing the toes up. in doing so she would provide for a full body motion capacity in her return strike.
however, to be honest, she had a better solution than the leg tap. she could have easily hooked the others arm/wrist, and with her being so far off balance, and controlled her. she would easily have a umber of options from that.
currently, her only true option, other than praying the red hair does not slip and hyperflex her knee in the fall, is to reverse her weight distribution and use her shoulder as a weapon. that would separate them, again use the lack of balance of the red hair girl to her advantage, and do a lot more physical and psychological damage to her opponent than a poor side punch would do.

and, as a note, considering how bad the red hair girl is on her center of balance, the other may actually be helping her by shifting her leg outward.
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teturo Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
I will keep that in mind in the future.
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Ayukawataur Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
have a look at the image on this page:
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it may help with understanding how balance and body mechanics work in still frame 3d rendering of combat.
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Ayukawataur Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
forgive me for being the first to say this, but they are relatively stiff, static, and very off balance.
more with the red hair girl, who will have very little power in her strike. though, the other has all most zero chance to evade in her current position as well.

not bad, but missing many dynamic elements.
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teturo Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
The pose was meant to show a mid point between an attack that did not connect, and a counter. Sakura trying a left hook, Ino dropping into a low stance and pulling Sakura's front leg out of position with her forward leg. Then Ino could shift her weight forward and connect her punch with Sakura's side

What changes would you suggest?
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aoi-ryu Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
Nicely done! :D
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
Thank you ^_^
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aoi-ryu Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
You're welcome! ^^
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KittyStardraco Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
nice shiney outfit, i like the poses too
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
Thank you ^_^
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
When did Slave-Leia become their fashion consultant?
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
I think these cover a bit more then that, but what an idea ^_^
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Cool, and who are we seeing now, teturo?
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
I have totally failed to make my model for Ino Yamanaka recognizable haven't I :(
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Ino... naruto's Ino it is? don´t remember the last name.
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
The only blonde in the series that wears a high ponytail ^_^
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
oh right right :nod:
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Lassic Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
very interesting clothes on the left girl :D
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Thank you!

Fear the shiny ^_^
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ShadowMaleRenamon Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
cat fights solve everything ^^
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Or they are at least entertaining for the spectators ^_~

Thank you again for the comments and the :+fav:!
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ShadowMaleRenamon Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
very true *nods*
keep up the good work ^^
lol, your last trivia stumped me >.<
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Just do a google search of her name and read the wiki page ^_~
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ShadowMaleRenamon Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
I'll do that right now ^^
how many people got it?
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Only one participant so far T_T
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ShadowMaleRenamon Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
I think I got it ^^
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
okay ^_^
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Match25 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
got to love a barefoot fight, but why do i get the feeling you prefer the barely clothed part lol
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Their current state of dress is good, better if the fight happens to involve torn fabric ^_^
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Match25 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
ah
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Dangerboy3D Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For the next one, they have to be in mud and I will be on the side with the water hose. Incredible as usual!
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Thank ya!

Mud is okay, but jello is tastier in the end ^_~
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Dangerboy3D Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would be droolin too much to notice.
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
good point ^_^
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Ean-Sze Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love there outfit !!


very nice work !
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
Thank you ^_^
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Ean-Sze Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very welcome !!
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t3h3r3ee Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SHINY! O_O
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
It does catch the eyes ^_^
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t3h3r3ee Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It does. :) This picture has a nice flow to it though. It feels as though I just peeked out in the middle of their fight. Nice work! :D
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teturo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
:glomp: thank you ^_^
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