I thought about writing a critique, as requested, but my comment is more on the larger body of your work than on this particular image. You have an amazing command of composition, lighting, environment (especially volume lights, used to great effect) but your images all appear "posed." Portrait shots, "smile for the camera" etc. I think you could take your art to the next level by adding action and dynamism to your work. Off balance, peril, action of any given sort. Running, flying, or even just stretching and rolling over. Try to catch your subjects "in the act," and I think you'll really like what you see.